Saturday, September 3, 2011

                                     बढ़ती उमर

                                                     बचपने  से ,लड़कपने से,
                                                     बढ़ रहे
                                                     लम्बी जबान , टेढ़ी नज़र
                                                     बढ़ती उमर

                                                     ख्वाब ऊँचे , बात ऊँची
                                                     कर रहे
                                                     आठों पहर , इधर-उधर
                                                     बढ़ती उमर

                                                     दर्द को ,माँ -बाप के
                                                     समझ रहे
                                                     बार -बार काट कर, कचोट कर
                                                     बढ़ती उमर       
                                    
                                                     उसकी यादें , उनकी  बातें कर
                                                     रो रहे 
                                                     कश  खींचे , बोतले  पीकर
                                                     बढ़ती उमर

                                                     पांच दिन खो कर , दो दिन
                                                     जी  रहे
                                                     डगर -डगर घूम कर , झूम कर
                                                     बढ़ती उमर

                                                     लम्बी कमाई , सत्य की दुहाई
                                                     दे रहे
                                                     चुरा कर , ' कर' और ' आयकर '
                                                     बढ़ती उमर

                                                    प्यार करते , रोज़ गिरते
                                                    दिख रहे
                                                    ज़िगर में बस ,छाती और क़मर 
                                                    बढ़ती उमर  

                                                    अड़ रहे -लड़ रहे , दिल ही दिल
                                                    जल रहे
                                                    आपको देखकर
                                                    बढ़ती उमर |

                                                                                        रचयिता - अमित गुप्ता 'भूदेव'  








3 comments:

  1. Amit Bhai, ka jawaab nahin- " Jawab nahin gori uska oye oye jawab nahin giri amit ka oye oye"

    Shaam ke gulaabi rango ko samet ke, subah ki ooss ki boond ko syaahi bana kar Amit jab likhta hai to ek naya rang aata hai... shabd kam hai par manshaa sahi hai meri ki Amit Bhai tussi great ho...

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  2. Amit bhai..ye pad k mje Apni hindi book yaad aa gyi,...Jab hme usme se Vyakya likhni padti thi..isme bhi vaise hi sabdo ka use kia gya hai...Hidden meanings...Sabdo ka sunder prayog ...agar pichli poem se compare karein to Unme seedhe sabdho mei baat khi gyi..
    Paanch din khokar 2 din jee rhe...lines achi hai..
    Overall..ye khi na khi is cheej ko point bhi karti hai ki hmari values Waqt k sath girti gyi hai...

    Well written...Ab ek kavya Collection ka kyu nhi try karte.... ??

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